Question

10．假設你是李津，你的母親突然生病了，由于父親在外出差，只能由你陪
母親看病并照料母親，不能參加明天下午關于美國文化的講座．請寫一封短信向老師請假．
內(nèi)容主要包括：1．不能聽講座，向老師表示歉意；2．向老師陳述缺席的理由；=．詢問老師是否有彌補的辦法，提出一些想法征求老師的意見，比如…
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100；2．開頭和結尾已經(jīng)寫出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Miss Clinton，
I'm very sorry that 
                      ．
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封寫給老師的請假信．寫作時，首先要寫清要點，包括：表達歉意，缺席理由，征求意見；其次，要用第一人稱；最后要注意時態(tài)以將來時態(tài)和現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．
重點短語和句型：
on a business trip 出差
take care of 照顧
ask for several days'leave 請幾天假
make up 彌補
I'm very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is about American culture．
句中that連接賓語從句；which引導非限制性定語從句．
I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture．
句中if連接賓語從句，表示是否．
I will do anything I can to make up my missed lecture as soon as possible．
句中I can后省略了do，前面省略了引導詞that，是一個定語從句；to make up my missed lecture as soon as possible作目的狀語．

解答 Dear Miss Clinton，
I'm very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is about American culture．（高分句型一）（表示歉意）
My mother is ill，and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip．I will take care of my mother until she is better，so I have to ask for several days'leave．（說明原因）I am very interested in the topic of American culture．It is really a pity that I miss it．I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture．高分句型二）If so，I can listen to it when it is convenient．（征求意見）All in all，I will do anything I can to make up my missed lecture as soon as possible．（高分句型三）
Thank you very much．
Yours，
Li Jin

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．