Question

10．假設(shè)你是李津，你的母親突然生病了，由于父親在外出差，只能由你陪
母親看病并照料母親，不能參加明天下午關(guān)于美國文化的講座．請(qǐng)寫一封短信向老師請(qǐng)假．
內(nèi)容主要包括：1．不能聽講座，向老師表示歉意；2．向老師陳述缺席的理由；=．詢問老師是否有彌補(bǔ)的辦法，提出一些想法征求老師的意見，比如…
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Miss Clinton，
I'm very sorry that 
                      ．
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封寫給老師的請(qǐng)假信．寫作時(shí)，首先要寫清要點(diǎn)，包括：表達(dá)歉意，缺席理由，征求意見；其次，要用第一人稱；最后要注意時(shí)態(tài)以將來時(shí)態(tài)和現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
on a business trip 出差
take care of 照顧
ask for several days'leave 請(qǐng)幾天假
make up 彌補(bǔ)
I'm very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is about American culture．
句中that連接賓語從句；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句．
I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture．
句中if連接賓語從句，表示是否．
I will do anything I can to make up my missed lecture as soon as possible．
句中I can后省略了do，前面省略了引導(dǎo)詞that，是一個(gè)定語從句；to make up my missed lecture as soon as possible作目的狀語．

解答 Dear Miss Clinton，
I'm very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is about American culture．（高分句型一）（表示歉意）
My mother is ill，and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip．I will take care of my mother until she is better，so I have to ask for several days'leave．（說明原因）I am very interested in the topic of American culture．It is really a pity that I miss it．I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture．高分句型二）If so，I can listen to it when it is convenient．（征求意見）All in all，I will do anything I can to make up my missed lecture as soon as possible．（高分句型三）
Thank you very much．
Yours，
Li Jin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對(duì)；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．