Question

5．假定你校正在開展"根除陋習、創(chuàng)建文明校園"活動．請你以此為主題用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，向全校學生倡議：
1．根除：亂扔垃圾、浪費食物、吸煙…2．提倡：講禮貌、互助…
Dear friends，
As is known to all，our school has launched a campaign against bad habits in order to
build a civilized campus．
         ．
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們就學校目前正在開展的"根除陋習、創(chuàng)建文明校園"活動，寫一篇發(fā)言稿，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：向全校學生倡議1．根除：亂扔垃圾、浪費食物、吸煙…2．提倡：講禮貌、互助…．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為演講主題．第二部分為"根除陋習、創(chuàng)建文明校園"活動的具體建議．
重點短語與句型：
As is known to all 眾所周知
 launch a campaign 發(fā)起一項活動
in public在公共場合
contribute to為…作貢獻
高分句型一：But I have noticed that a lot of bad behavior still exists in our school，which does great harm to the image of o ur school．
．此句用了which引導非限制性定語從句
高分句型二：Therefore，I strongly suggest that we students stop throwing rubbish everywhere and spitting in public．此句suggest后賓語從句用虛擬語氣，should可省略．

解答 Dear friends，
As is known to all，our school has launched a campaign against bad habits in order to establish a civilized campus．But I have noticed that a lot of bad behavior still exists in our school，which does great harm to the image of o ur school．（高分句型一）（演講主題）
Therefore，I strongly suggest that we students stop throwing rubbish everywhere and spitting in public（高分句型二）．Besides，no one should make dirty remarks or waste food．Such bad manners as smoking and fighting should also be removed from our campus．At the same time，we should perform good manners all the time and everywhere．We also promote the spirit of helping each other and healthy competition．Once again I'm here earnestly calling on everyone to take action and contribute to making our school a nicer place．
（"根除陋習、創(chuàng)建文明校園"活動的具體建議）
    That's all．Thank you．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧