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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

My cousin, Daniel, is the most success person I know, even though he has had many difficulties on his road to achieve success. His parents died in a accident when he was 17. Daniel needed to take care of his two younger brother, so he left school and found a job at a supermarket. At night, he helped them about homework and did all the housework. Daniel was also a very good worker. His boss was decided to help him go to college. It takes Daniel eight years, but finally he finished. Now Daniel plans attend a business management course and start his own business three years late. Daniel has a dream, but he is working hard to achieve it.

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【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文。作者的表弟因父母在事故中喪生，承擔(dān)了照顧兩個(gè)弟弟的任務(wù)，后來輟學(xué)打工，老板送他上了大學(xué)，最終自己打算創(chuàng)業(yè)。

1.考查形容詞。此處person是名詞，形容詞修飾名詞，故把success改成successful。

2.考查動(dòng)詞名詞。the road to sth/doing sth.“通向某事或做某事的路”，此處to是介詞，所以后面用動(dòng)名詞作介詞的賓語，故把achieve改成achieving。

3.考查不定冠詞。句意：他的父母在他17歲時(shí)死于一場事故。此處accident以元音音素開頭，故把a改成an。

4.考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)前面的two可知名詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把brother改成brothers。

5.考查固定搭配。help sb. with sth.幫助某人某事，故把about改成with。

6.考察主動(dòng)語態(tài)。句意：他的老板決定幫助他上大學(xué)。此句是主動(dòng)語態(tài)，故把was去掉。

7.考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：丹尼爾花了八年的時(shí)間，但最終他完成了。結(jié)合句意可知句子用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把takes改成took。

8.考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。plan to do sth.計(jì)劃做某事，故在attend前加to。

9.考查固定用法。three years later“三年后”，故把late改成later。

10.考查并列連詞。句意：丹尼爾有一個(gè)夢想，他正在努力實(shí)現(xiàn)它。此處表示并列的遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，故把but改成and。