Question

18．假定你是李華，下周將有一位新外教來你班任教．你的班主任計劃舉辦一個簡短的儀式．就此請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．打聽旅途情況；
2．簡介班級情況；
3．期待成為朋友．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear sir，
Welcome to our school．
It must be a very tiring journey that you have taken the plane for a long time．I want to know whether there is anything uncomfortable for you and how you feel now．（高分句型一）I hope everything will be OK with you．
Now let me introduce something about our class for you．There are 52 students in the class，including 30 boys and 22 girls．（高分句型二）We get along well with each other．However，unfortunately，we are poor in English，especially in speaking and writing．（高分句型三）So I hope we can become friends soon．In that case，we can help each other in life and study．China is a beautiful country that has many places of interest to visit．I'm willing to be you tour guide in the future．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息下周將有一位新外教來你班任教．你的班主任計劃舉辦一個簡短的儀式．就此請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點(diǎn)：打聽旅途情況；簡介班級情況；期待成為朋友．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：for a long time好長時間；including包括，包含；get along well with與…相處的好；be poor in在…方面差；in that case假若那樣的話；places of interest名勝古跡；be willing to do愿意做某事
I want to know whether there is anything uncomfortable for you and how you feel now．（高分句型一）
There are 52 students in the class，including 30 boys and 22 girls．（高分句型二）
However，unfortunately，we are poor in English，especially in speaking and writing．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear sir，
       Welcome to our school．It must be a very tiring journey that you have taken the plane for a long time．I want to know whether there is anything uncomfortable for you and how you feel now．（高分句型一）I hope everything will be OK with you．
       Now let me introduce something about our class for you．There are 52 students in the class，including 30 boys and 22 girls．（高分句型二）We get along well with each other．However，unfortunately，we are poor in English，especially in speaking and writing．（高分句型三）So I hope we can become friends soon．In that case，we can help each other in life and study．China is a beautiful country that has many places of interest to visit．I'm willing to be you tour guide in the future．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．