Question

【題目】最近，你們班就社會上勸酒的習(xí)慣做了一個討論，請你就該討論的結(jié)果用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶�及理由。要點如下：

60%反對者認(rèn)為：1. 對青少年產(chǎn)生不良影響；2. 酒駕導(dǎo)致車禍。

40%支持者認(rèn)為：1. 表明主人好客(hospitality)；2. 便于交流。

Recently, the students in my class have had a discussion about whether it is good to persuade guests to drink. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Recently, the students in my class have had a discussion about whether it is good to persuade guests to drink. Different students have different opinions.

60% of the students are against the tradition. They hold the view that drinking in front of teenagers will have a negative influence on them, some of whom may become addicted to drinking after growing up. What’s worse, drunk driving has killed more people than any other kind of accident.

However, others don’t think so. They believe people’s hospitality will be clearly shown through drinking happily with guests. In addition, drinking can be a way to create a relaxing environment for friends or relatives to communicate.

As far as I am concerned, drinking is not a good way of life. Because it often leads to overdrinking, which does great harm to people’s health. So, we’d better get rid of this bad tradition.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于運用文。要求就社會上勸酒的習(xí)慣的討論結(jié)果寫一篇短文，并談?wù)効捶�及理由�?/span>

第一步：審題

體裁：運用文。

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。

要求：

描述討論結(jié)果并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ê屠碛伞?/span>

第二步：列提綱（重點短語）

hold the view; people’s hospitality; leads to overdrinking

第三步：連詞成句

1.They hold the view that drinking in front of teenagers will have a negative influence on them, some of whom may become addicted to drinking after growing up

2.They believe people’s hospitality will be clearly shown through drinking happily with guests.

3.Because it often leads to overdrinking, which does great harm to people’s health.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇

1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：描述討論結(jié)果；闡述自己看法。

2. 表示并列補充關(guān)系：What’s worse; However; In addition; As far as I am concerned; Because; So

第五步：潤色修改