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假如你是張華， 近日寫信給某英文報的編輯，反映目前人們養(yǎng)寵物帶來的問題，希望得到媒體的關注和支持。信的內(nèi)容應包括以下要點：

1.寵物過多，噪音擾民； 2. 污染環(huán)境； 3. 不少人尤其孩子曾被驚嚇或咬傷；4. 傳播疾病。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.信的開頭和署名已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear editor,

Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.

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Yours faithfully,

Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.

I consider the problems more and more serious for the following reasons. First of all, as is known to us, pets make too much noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s worse, it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people. Worse still, pets can spread some disease and this has attracted much attention.

Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for it.

Yours faithfully,

Zhang Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是張華， 近日寫信給某英文報的編輯，反映目前人們養(yǎng)寵物帶來的問題，希望得到媒體的關注和支持。信的內(nèi)容應包括以下要點：1.寵物過多，噪音擾民； 2. 污染環(huán)境； 3. 不少人尤其孩子曾被驚嚇或咬傷；4. 傳播疾病。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.信的開頭和署名已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough.表示轉折的并列句；So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.過去分詞作定語；First of all, as is known to us, pets make too much noise that trouble residents a lot.as引導非限制性定語從句；it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable.主語從句和非限制性定語從句完美結合；Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people句中運用where引導的定語從句；Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；另外，F(xiàn)irst of all, What’s worse, Worse still,的運用使文章顯得層次分明，結構嚴謹，為文章增色添彩。