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【題目】假如你是李華，針對(duì)我國(guó)假期選擇出國(guó)旅游的人越來(lái)越多，但有的游客有不文明行為的現(xiàn)象，請(qǐng)給21st Century Teens編輯部寫一封信。內(nèi)容需要包括以下要點(diǎn):

1.出境游熱的原因，如經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的原因、人們對(duì)外國(guó)文化感興趣的原因等；

2.旅游中出現(xiàn)了一些不文明現(xiàn)象，如隨地吐痰、亂扔垃圾等；

3.你的態(tài)度和看法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右

2.短文開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

參考詞匯：不文明行為：immoral behaviors 樹立形象：uphold an image

Dear editor,

At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays.

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Thank you for your attention.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays. There are some vital reasons. With the development of people’s living standard and economy, they can afford to go abroad . Besides, more people are becoming interested in foreign cultures, therefore, they are eager to visit them with their own eyes.

However, some people behave very badly in foreign countries. For example, they drop litter everywhere , as well as spit freely in public, which not only shows bad personal qualities , but also does great harm to the image of the country.

Personally, since it’s well known that China is an ancient civilized country with a long history , we should always bear / keep it in mind that it is everyone’s responsibility to uphold image of our motherland.

Thank you for your attention.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，文章的思路應(yīng)該是先介紹出境游熱的原因，如經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的原因、人們對(duì)外國(guó)文化感興趣的原因等；第2段中寫旅游中出現(xiàn)了一些不文明現(xiàn)象，如隨地吐痰、亂扔垃圾等；最后一段，是最重要要表達(dá)自己的看法或者見解。

需要考生用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫作時(shí)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語(yǔ)句通順，應(yīng)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

1.連接詞的使用 At present, Besides, therefore, However,

2.With the development of people’s living standard and economy, they can afford to go abroad . with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。

3. they drop litter everywhere , as well as spit freely in public, which not only shows bad personal qualities , but also does great harm to the image of the country. which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，以及as well as，but also連接詞的使用。

4. since it’s well known that China is an ancient civilized country with a long history , we should always bear / keep it in mind that it is ；since引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句以及it作形式主語(yǔ)。