Question

4．第二節(jié) 書面表達
假定你是李會，你的留學生朋友Peter發(fā)郵件說，他正在學漢語，但感覺很吃力，請求你給予幫助．請給他回封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．舉例說明漢語學習的特點；
2．提供一些可行的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，Hope this email finds you well!Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties．It's inevitable because English emphasizes the structure，while Chinese focuses on the meaning．With regard to the matter you mentioned in your letter，my suggestions are as follows：
　　Firstly，I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner，and meet with him on a regular basis．Besides，watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting．
　　Those are the tips on my mind now．I would always be pleased to offer you help．I do hope you will find these proposals practical．
Yours，
Li Hu．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關于語言學習的作文．就題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容主要包括：一舉例說明漢語學習的特點；二提供一些可行的建議；三表達祝愿．
高分句型：
1．It's inevitable because English emphasizes the structure，while Chinese focuses on the meaning．句子里inevitable表示"不可避免的"；while表示"然而"，表示對比的含義．
這是不可避免的，因為英語強調(diào)結構，然而漢語強調(diào)含義．
2．Firstly，I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner，and meet with him on a regular basis．句子里recommend表示"推薦，建議"，meet with 表示"會晤"；on a regular basis表示"經(jīng)常地"．
首先，我建議你找一個中國人作為你的語言學習伙伴，和他經(jīng)常見面．

解答 Dear Peter，
　　Hope this email finds you well!Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties．It's inevitable because English emphasizes the structure，while Chinese focuses on the meaning．【高分句型一】With regard to the matter you mentioned in your letter，my suggestions are as follows：（舉例說明漢語學習的特點；）
　　Firstly，I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner，and meet with him on a regular basis．【高分句型二】Besides，watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting．（提供一些可行的建議）
　　Those are the tips on my mind now．I would always be pleased to offer you help．I do hope you will find these proposals practical．（表達祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hu

點評 考查提綱類作文．
while 用作連詞時，有以下幾種含義：
1．意為"當…時候，和…同時"，引導時間狀語從句．例如：
While I was watching TV，the bell rang．（我看電視時，鈴響了．）
2．意為"雖然，盡管"，引導讓步狀語從句．例如：
While it was late，he went on working．（雖然很晚了，但他還在繼續(xù)工作．）
3．連接兩個并列句子，表示"對比"關系．例如：
He went out for a walk，while I stayed at home．（他出去散步了，而我卻呆在家里．）