Question

【題目】環(huán)境一直是人們普遍關(guān)注的話題，也是每位學(xué)生喜愛和經(jīng)常討論的話題。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)下表的信息，寫一篇英文短文。

環(huán)境	怎樣保護、創(chuàng)造良好的環(huán)境
社會環(huán)境	有禮貌，樂于助人，盡力為別人著想
學(xué)校環(huán)境	尊敬師長，團結(jié)同學(xué)，積極創(chuàng)造有利于健康、學(xué)習(xí)的生活環(huán)境
家庭環(huán)境	體諒父母，做力所能及的事
就如何保護環(huán)境，發(fā)表自己的觀點……

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

參考詞匯：schoolyard校園

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Answer 1

【答案】How can we protect and create a harmonious environment?

First of all,we should use proper words,behave politely and think for others.If we want to live and study happily, we should respect teachers,unite other students,and help each other.We should also treat and understand others with more patience.Besides,we should keep schoolyard clean,which helps to make our body healthy.Finally,we need to make efforts to create a family environment full of love and warmth.Often communicating with our parents,we will help them do what we can.

In my opinion,environment protection depends on the efforts made by everyone.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇關(guān)于“環(huán)境”的英語短文。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

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