假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文 中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(＾)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞：

2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her．So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”

1.pays 改成paid

2.With time went on 改成As time went on 或者 With time going on

3.have been 改成had been

4.day 改成days

5.In the way 改成On the way

6.much snacks 改成many snacks

7.chat改成chatting(our chat)或chat前加to

8.their 改成our

9.silently改成silent

10.after while 改成after a while

【解析】

試題分析：考查時態(tài)，從句，固定短語等。

1. 改成paid；第二句But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her前半句為過去式，后半句也應(yīng)用過去式，故將pays 改成paid

2. time went on 改成As time went on 或者 With time going on；第四句With time went on，有謂語動詞，是個句子，with后不能接句子，要么改為狀語從句，要么改為伴隨狀語，故將With time went on 改成As time went on 或者 With time going on

3. been 改成had been；第四句I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time主句為過去式，從句也應(yīng)是過去式，故將have been 改成had been

4. 改成days；第六句When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，a few修飾可數(shù)名詞時需是復(fù)數(shù)，故將day 改成days

5. the way 改成On the way；第七句In the way to the playground，On the way to …是固定短語，在去..的路上，故將In the way 改成On the way

6. snacks 改成many snacks；第八句I bought much snacks for her，much修飾不可數(shù)名詞，而snacks是可數(shù)名詞，故將much snacks 改成many snacks

7. chat)或chat前加to；第九句Then we began chat．begin后不能接動詞原形，+doing/to do /名詞，故將chat改成chatting(our chat)或chat前加to

8. 改成our；第十句When we talked about their childhood應(yīng)該是談?wù)撐覀兊耐�，故將their 改成our

9. was silently，be動詞后接形容詞，而silently是副詞，故將silently改成silent

10. while 改成after a while；第十二句But after while she said，要表示過了一會兒，應(yīng)用固定短語after a while，沒有after while這個短語，故將after while 改成after a while

考點：考查短文改錯

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