Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，你的好朋友張敏來信說每次遇到重要的考試，她都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮的癥狀，想讓你給她提出一些建議并說明建議的理由。請你用英語給她寫一封回信，信的內(nèi)容包括以下要點：

1.考前制定好復習計劃；

2.考試期間正常休息；

3.介紹有助于睡眠的兩種方法；

4.希望對方考試順利。

注意：1.不要逐字翻譯，可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

2.字數(shù)：100左右。信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯 anxiety n. 焦慮

Dear ZhangMin,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear ZhangMin,

I’m sorry to hear that you are always anxious before important exams. But I don’t think it difficult to get out of such exam anxiety if you can take the following tips.

First of all/To begin with, it’s a good habit to study hard every day and a proper revision schedule may help a lot for the coming exam. In this way, you can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Besides/In addition, plenty sleep can make you energetic and enable you to perform well/better in the exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, it is not wise/a good idea to stay up too late. If you can not fall asleep before an exam, why not try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which may help you to have a sound sleep.

I hope you can find your best state and good luck to your coming exams.

Yours.

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點已給出，寫作時可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：字數(shù)：100左右。信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇書信。分三段式，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，布局合理，運用高級句子。I’m sorry to hear that you are always anxious before important exams.賓語從句用在句中；But I don’t think it difficult to get out of such exam anxiety if you can take the following tips.條件狀語從句和賓語從句結合句中，同時it作形式賓語，動詞不定式作真正的賓語；why not try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which may help you to have a sound sleep. why not結構和which引導的非限制性定語從句同句出現(xiàn)；另外，F(xiàn)irst of all/To begin with, In this way, Besides/In addition, Therefore,的運用為文章增色添彩。