分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息根據(jù)提示,給你的美國朋友Jim寫一封感謝信,感謝你在美國游學(xué)期間對你的幫助.寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:寫出寫信目的;闡述感謝的原因;再次表達感謝,并可表述希望有機會可以給對方回報.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
(高級句型一)Arriving there,my language was not very good…
該句使用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語,表示伴隨狀況;
(高級句型二)you took me out to so many places of interests,which brought me a great grasp of ancient and present-day America..
which是 一個非限制性定語從句,做主語;
(高級句型三)I can't thank you more..
該句式里cannot否定詞和比較級more連用表示的最高級;
高級詞匯:am still lost in 沉浸在…;fool愚弄;
解答 Dear Jim,
I'm writing to express my thanks for your help during my stay in the USA.I've been back home safely but I am still lost in the good days spent togeter with you and your family.(介紹寫信的目的)
I'm really grateful for your good care and kind help in America.(高級句型一)Arriving there,my language was not very good,and do you still remember you help me with my presentation on Mr.Donald's lecture?Without your help with my language,I must have fooled myself.Besides this,(高級句型二)you took me out to so many places of interests,which brought me a great grasp of ancient and present-day America.The most touching and warmest experience was having met and stayed with your family,which is a democratic,open,friendly and encouraging family.I have to say that I love you all from the bottom of my heart.(解釋感謝的原因)
(高級句型三)I can't thank you more,and I hope in the near future you'd like to visit Beijing,China.Then,I can try my best to pay you back.I'd like to introduce you to all my family and friends,and I'm hoping to take you to the Great Wall,one of the seven wonders in the world.(再次表示感謝)
I'm looking forward to your reply.Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua.
點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點.寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時需注意積累短語和重要句型.
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