Question

【題目】近日你所在的學(xué)校開展了“為建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會(huì)獻(xiàn)一計(jì)”主題活動(dòng)，同學(xué)們提出了許多建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇短文向English Horizons雜志編輯部投稿：

有人建議

1.不浪費(fèi)糧食和紙張 2.盡量不使用方便筷、塑料袋3.畢業(yè)生將書贈(zèng)給低年級(jí)同學(xué)循環(huán)使用？

注意：1.不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2.詞數(shù)：120字左右，開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.參考詞匯：方便筷disposable chopsticks

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society”in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.

Some students suggest that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled

Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知，近日你所在的學(xué)校開展了“為建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會(huì)獻(xiàn)一計(jì)”主題活動(dòng)，同學(xué)們提出了許多建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇短文向English Horizons雜志編輯部投稿：

有人建議 1.不浪費(fèi)糧食和紙張 2.盡量不使用方便筷、塑料袋3.畢業(yè)生將書贈(zèng)給低年級(jí)同學(xué)循環(huán)使用？

短文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱和第三人稱。詞數(shù)120左右，不要太多或太少。盡量多使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子之間的連貫性。作文打分重點(diǎn)關(guān)注文體，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，語言表達(dá)的連貫性和地道性。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】 文中用了一些高級(jí)的短語和句式。如：are highly concerned about 、suggest和recommend引導(dǎo)的虛擬語氣、which引導(dǎo)的定語從句等都很不錯(cuò)。