Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。請你給北京 2019 馬拉松組委會負(fù)責(zé)人 Mr. Zhang寫封信，申請成為一名志愿者。內(nèi)容包括：

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于 50；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：北京馬拉松組委會 Beijing Marathon Organizing Committee

Dear Mr. Zhang,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,

My name is Li Hua, a student in Hongxing Senior High School. Knowing that Beijing Marathon will be held in 2019 on the official website of Beijing Marathon Organizing Committee, I am so excited that I can’t wait to be a volunteer.

As a sports-lover myself, I have a general idea of the rules of different marathons. In addition, I am also good at communicating with others and eager to lend a hand to people in need. With the spirit of voluntary work rooted in my heart, I have been a volunteer in many activities and I am sure that I can be a suitable volunteer you need. If I am honored enough to be accepted as a volunteer, I will serve the runners heart and soul, using my patience and carefulness to make them feel at home.

Look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

這篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。請你給北京 2019 馬拉松組委會負(fù)責(zé)人 Mr. Zhang寫封信，申請成為一名志愿者。人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：official website官方網(wǎng)站，volunteer志愿者，In addition此外，be good at擅長，communicate with交流，lend a hand幫助，in need在危難中，suitable適當(dāng)?shù)模?/span>heart and soul全心全意地，patience耐心，carefulness仔細(xì)。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。