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17．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改． 1．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（Λ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞． 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉． 修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
 Dear Tom，
      How are you？I am just writing to tell you I had wonderful time at your place in New Year．I arrived home，safely and sound．I have something to ask for you．I have been looking through my bags for my favorite red shirt，or I can't find it anywhere．I'm surely must have left it at your place．Could you look around your house for it？
      By the way，I am planning Mom and Dad's wedding anniversary celebration．I had already invited you and your parent．I wonder whether you would like to come to Chicago this time．How do you think of it？Take care of you and write to me soon．Giving my regards to Uncle Bernard and Aunt Norah．
                                                                      Love，
                                                                      Diana．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封寫給好朋友Tom的書信．我在你那玩得很開心，現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)平安到家．我在書包找不到我喜歡的紅襯衫，肯定是丟在你那了．我還為我的父母準(zhǔn)備了結(jié)婚周年紀(jì)念，邀請你和你的父母參加，等你的回復(fù)．

解答 Dear Tom，
      How are you？I am just writing to tell you I had∧wonderful time at your place in New Year．I arrived home，safely and sound．I have something to ask for you．I have been looking through my bags for my favorite red shirt，or I can't find it anywhere．I'm surely I Imust have left it at your place．Could you look around your house for it？
      By the way，I am planning Mom and Dad's wedding anniversary celebration．I had already invited you and your parent．I wonder whether you would like to come to Chicago this time．How do you think of it？Take care of you and write to me soon．Giving my regards to Uncle Bernard and Aunt Norah．
詳解：
1．加a；短語搭配錯誤．have a wonderful time玩得很開心．
2．safely改為safe；短語搭配錯誤．safe and sound平安無事．
3．for去掉；動詞短語搭配錯誤．a(chǎn)sk for需要；句意表達(dá)的是詢問，不需要加介詞．
4．or改為but；連詞錯誤．句意表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折，不是選擇．
5．surely改為sure；副詞錯誤．be sure確信，有把握．
6．had改為have；時態(tài)錯誤．句意表達(dá)的已經(jīng)完成的動作，要用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)．
7．parent改為parents；名詞錯誤．父母是兩個人，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
8．How改為What；特殊疑問詞錯誤．what do you think of sth？認(rèn)為某事怎么樣．
9．you改為yourself；代詞錯誤．take care of oneself照顧自己．
10．Giving改為Give；動詞錯誤．句意表達(dá)的是請求，是祈使句，要用動詞原形來構(gòu)成．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識．�？嫉闹�識點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關(guān)的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．