Question

8．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文．
When it comes to success，much will be given to those who are hard working； little to those who are lazy．
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例；
④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本文提示意思當(dāng)成功來(lái)臨時(shí)，大多屬于勤奮的人，很少會(huì)給懶惰的人．即文章應(yīng)該講述勤奮對(duì)于成功的重要性．考生應(yīng)注意寫(xiě)到生活中的事例而不是名人事例．文章應(yīng)用過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)為了語(yǔ)言的連貫應(yīng)該恰當(dāng)使用連接詞和插入語(yǔ)；注意高級(jí)詞匯和句式的使用．
重要短語(yǔ)：
be　ashamed of，因什么而羞恥，honestly speaking，老實(shí)說(shuō)，paid off 得到回報(bào)．
高分句子：
1．I made it a　rual to read aloud English for half an hour every morning．本句中Imade it a　rual to 為重要句式，堅(jiān)持做．
2．Meanwhile，I tried to grasp what my teacher taught in class．本句中g(shù)rasp后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句，從句又含that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句．

解答 One important lesson I've learnt from school life is that success comes from hard work．（開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)題）
       When I entered the high school a year ago，I was ashamed of my English．Since my English teacher encouraged me to work harder，I've made rapid progress and gained great confidence．Honestly speaking，I made it a　rual to read aloud English for half an hour every morning．（高分句型）And on my way to school or home I kept listening to English downloaded．Also I learnt every text by heart until I could recite it．Meanwhile，I tried to grasp what my teacher taught in class．（高分句型）To my delight，my efforts    paid off and I often got a high score in English．Now　I　have　become　the top student in school．（舉出具體事例）
　　So I believe that success belongs to those who are hard working．In fact，learning English isn't only learning a subject but also　having　a wonderful journey of discovery （with great efforts）．（總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 對(duì)于開(kāi)放式作文，考生寫(xiě)作時(shí)，可以選取能運(yùn)用熟悉的英語(yǔ)詞匯、句型的點(diǎn)進(jìn)行展開(kāi)，在構(gòu)思時(shí)對(duì)于沒(méi)有把握的地方，要靈活變通或者懂得舍棄．要在掌握最好的方面寫(xiě)作，提高分?jǐn)?shù)．