Question

新課程實施以來，有些學(xué)校取消了晚自習(xí)，你所在的班級學(xué)生對是否取消晚自習(xí)展開了一次討論。請結(jié)合以下討論內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

贊成觀點	反對觀點
1.能給學(xué)生更多的自主學(xué)習(xí)和休息時間； 2.有時間發(fā)展個人愛好。	1.相對在家自習(xí)，在校學(xué)習(xí)效率更高； 2.通過師生交流，生生交流，學(xué)習(xí)問題可以得到及時解決。
你的觀點……

注意：1. 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；2. 詞數(shù)：120左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Recently, our class have held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled. ________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Recently, our class has held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled. Opinions vary from person to person.

Some of them are in favor of the idea that the evening classes should be cancelled. To begin with, cancelling evening classes means that they have more time for independent learning and resting. Besides, students will have more time to develop their hobbies such as reading, playing sports, drawing and so on. However, others object to this idea. From their point of view, compared with studying at home, studying at school may lead to high study efficiency. What’s more, the problems existing in study can be dealt with as soon as possible by means of communicating with teachers and cooperating with classmates.

Weighing advantages and disadvantages, I prefer studying at home because I’m willing to form the habit of being independent and I tend to arrange study time myself.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是是否取消晚課，給出了大部分要點，就是對贊成和反對的不同觀點，要考生給出自己的觀點。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是贊同的觀點，然后是反對的觀點，最后是自己的觀點，要求考生用地道的英語表達自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個整體。

【亮點說明】范文觀點明確，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言簡潔，用詞講究，句式多變，舉例如下： in favor of贊同， To begin with首先, by means of通過，object to反對，F(xiàn)rom their point of view, 就他們看來，the idea 后面是that連接的同位語從句， cancelling evening classes means that they have more time for independent learning and resting.這句話使用了動名詞做主語和that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句， compared with studying at home, studying at school may lead to high study efficiency. 這句話使用了過去分詞做狀語，the problems existing in study can be dealt with as soon as possible by means of communicating with teachers and cooperating with classmates.這句話用現(xiàn)在分詞做短語，Weighing advantages and disadvantages, I prefer studying at home because I’m willing to form the habit of being independent and I tend to arrange study time myself.這句話使用現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語。還有Besides,However, What’s more,這些詞的使用使文章更加連貫。

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