Question

15．假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Erica發(fā)來郵件，向你詢問如何學好中文．請參考以下提示給Erica回復郵件，提出至少4條建議．
郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好．
?take a Chinese course
?watch or listen to Chinese programmes
?visit Chinese website
?…
Dear Erica，
    I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on learning Chinese．
Here are my suggestions．To get started，you may take a Chinese course to learn basic knowledge about Chinese characters and grammar rules．（高分句型一）And in your spare time，you canwatch or listen to Chinese programmes on TV or radio as understanding theculture is important for learning the language．（高分句型二）Chinese website is another convenient resource for learning Chinese．Besides，it's a good idea to learn Chinese by learning Chinese songs．Yet，Ithink the most efficient way is to make more Chinese friends．（高分句型三）I'm sure you will learn a lot of colloquial Chinese from talking with them．
    Please do let me know if you need further help．
    Best wishes．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給Erica回復郵件，提出至少4條建議，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：take a Chinese course?watch or listen to Chinese programmes?visit Chinese website?…2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：ask for advice尋求建議；in your spare time在你空閑時間；Besides另外；
To get started，you may take a Chinese course to learn basic knowledge about Chinese characters and grammar rules．（高分句型一）
And in your spare time，you can watch or listen to Chinese programmes on TV or radio as understanding the culture is important for learning the language．（高分句型二）
Yet，I think the most efficient way is to make more Chinese friends．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Erica，
      I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on learning Chinese．
      Here are my suggestions．To get started，you may take a Chinese course to learn basic knowledge about Chinese characters and grammar rules．（高分句型一）And in your spare time，you can watch or listen to Chinese programmes on TV or radio as understanding the culture is important for learning the language．（高分句型二）Chinese website is another convenient resource for learning Chinese．Besides，it's a good idea to learn Chinese by learning Chinese songs．Yet，I think the most efficient way is to make more Chinese friends．（高分句型三）I'm sure you will learn a lot of colloquial Chinese from talking with them．
      Please do let me know if you need further help．
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．