Question

1．下列表格為某市2006年2016年人們度假方式的情況比較，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文描述表格中的內(nèi)容，并對(duì)度假方式的變化原因進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)析．

年度	2006	2016	原因
境外旅游	11%	22%	收入增加
海邊度假	38%	31%	海水污染
爬山野營(yíng)	11%	34%	親近自然

注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
The way people spend their holidays changed a lot in 2006 and 2016．The table shows that 22% of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2016，which doubled that of 2006．We are sure that the number will increase because with their incomes rising，more people can afford the journeys abroad．
At the same time，the seaside attracted a lot of people．However，the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2006 to 31% in 2016，because the sea water is being polluted．The polluted seaside is likely to drive more visitors away．
The year 2016 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping．The rate in 2016 is 34%，more than three times of that in 2006．The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于圖表類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息并對(duì)此結(jié)果發(fā)表你的看法．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息    2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
高分句型：
1．The table shows that 22% of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2016，which doubled that of 2006．
本句為that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，后面為which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾前面的句子；spend time doing sth花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事．
2．However，the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2006 to 31% in 2016，because the sea water is being polluted．
本句為because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，主句包含短語(yǔ)drop from…to…從…下降到…；slightly為副詞用來(lái)修飾動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)drop．
3．The year 2016 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping．
本句為時(shí)間詞作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用see，表示"見(jiàn)證"；who引導(dǎo)一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞people．go climbing 去and camping爬山、宿營(yíng)．

解答 The way people spend their holidays changed a lot in 2006 and 2016．（表格變化）
The table shows that 22% of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2016，which doubled that of 2006．（高分句型一）We are sure that the number will increase because with their incomes rising，more people can afford the journeys abroad．（境外旅游）
At the same time，the seaside attracted a lot of people．However，the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2006 to 31% in 2016，because the sea water is being polluted．（高分句型二）The polluted seaside is likely to drive more visitors away．（海邊度假）
The year 2016 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping．（高分句型三）The rate in 2016 is 34%，more than three times of that in 2006．The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature．（爬山野營(yíng)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧