Question

前不久，中央電視臺(tái)記者奔赴全國各地以“什么是幸福？”為主題進(jìn)行隨機(jī)采訪，采訪對象的回答各種各樣，不盡相同。作為一位高三的學(xué)生，請你根據(jù)以下的提示，以What is Happiness 為題，寫一篇英語短文。

提示:

1. 不同的人對“什么是幸福？”的回答各不相同。

2. 你認(rèn)為追求自己人生目標(biāo)的過程就是一種幸福。

3. 因?yàn)樾腋�來自于樂觀的態(tài)度，努力后的成就和簡樸健康的生活。

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)120左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）

2. 不要逐句翻譯，圍繞以上提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，行文連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

What is Happiness

Recently the reporters from CCTV have made a random interview with people in different areas across China on what is happiness. Different people have different ideas.

Some people think happiness comes from being rich and famous while others say that being a good person leads to happiness. In my opinion, happiness results from the process of achieving your own goal.

Firstly, happiness is rooted in an optimistic attitude, with which we can face any problem in work and life. In this way happiness will never be far from us. Secondly, true happiness depends on hard work. When we achieve something after working hard at it, we will feel content, which is an important part of happiness. Last but not least, happiness comes from simplicity. Those who spend too much money to satisfy their desires will never feel happy. So living a simple but content and healthy life can make a person very happy.

【解析】

試題分析：題目為開放式的題目，并未要求寫具體的內(nèi)容，考生可根據(jù)自己的理解來寫，每個(gè)人對幸福的定義，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)都不盡相同，所以對考生而言，發(fā)揮的空間比較大。但是這樣的題目也應(yīng)在寫之前確定他的方向，盡管幸福的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)不同，但內(nèi)容都要是積極健康的。這一點(diǎn)尤其重要。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章從內(nèi)容來說很豐富，寫出了什么才是真正的幸福，主次得當(dāng)。從語言來說，句子結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)且沒有語法錯(cuò)誤，文中也使用了一些定從以及非謂語動(dòng)詞作主語的形式，使語言豐富多彩，不枯燥。例如：happiness is rooted in an optimistic attitude, with which we can face any problem in work and life. In this way happiness will never be far from us. So living a simple but content and healthy life can make a person very happy.

【考點(diǎn)】考查語言表達(dá)能力。