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4．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^）并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線?并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處?多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I'm the captain of our school team so with my fellow players  we've won several games．There will an important game next month．But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn't  play basketball once more．His parents asked him to spend in more time  preparing for the  college entrance examination．I feel sorry to him．But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports  and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son．So my friend had  no choice．He wanted to make their parents happy．

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分析 本文作者通過講述自己的一位優(yōu)秀的隊(duì)友不能再打籃球的原因，從而表達(dá)了自己替那位隊(duì)友感到難過的心情．

解答 I'm the captain of our school team so with my fellow players 
we've won several games．There will∧an important game next
month．But one of the best player in our team told me just then
that he wouldn't  play basketball once more．His parents asked
him to spendin more time  preparing for the  college entrance
examination．I feel sorrytohim．But his parents thinkgoto college
is more important than playing sports  and  collegewasthe only place
for a smart boy like their son．So my friend had  no choice．He wanted to
make their parents happy．

詳解：
1．so改為and    考查句意理解   本句的意思是：我是我們學(xué)校（籃球）隊(duì)的隊(duì)長(zhǎng)，并且和我的隊(duì)友們已經(jīng)贏得了幾場(chǎng)比賽；此處表示并列，并非因果關(guān)系；故用and．
2．在will后加be    考查there be句型的將來時(shí)態(tài)    此處用在there之后，表達(dá)的是"將有"的意思，即：下個(gè)月將有一場(chǎng)重要的比賽；故在will后加be   
3．player改為players   考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)    此處指的是：最優(yōu)秀選手之中的一個(gè)，應(yīng)使用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式；故用players．
4．then改為now   考查固定短語    just now意為：剛才； just then 意為：就在那時(shí)；本句的意思是：但是我們隊(duì)最好的隊(duì)員剛才告訴我他不再打籃球了；此處的意思是：剛才；故用now．
5．once改為any     考查固定短語    not…any more 意為"不再做某事；once more：再次；此處的意思是：他不再打籃球了；故用any．
6．去掉 spend 之后的in   考查固定句型結(jié)構(gòu)    sb．spend（s）+時(shí)間+（in）doing sth．意為：表示某人花做某事；故去掉 spend 之后的in．
7．to改為for    考查固定短語    be sorry for sb．為某人感到遺憾（難過）；be sorry to do sth．"很抱歉做了某事"；此處指的是作者為那位不能再打籃球的優(yōu)秀隊(duì)員感到難過；故用for．  
8．go改為going     考查動(dòng)名詞     此處在句中作主語，表示的是具體的動(dòng)作；故用動(dòng)名詞going．
9．was改為is   考查時(shí)態(tài)   根據(jù)主句"But his parents think"使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)可知，從句表達(dá)的應(yīng)是他父母現(xiàn)在的想法，所以此處應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；故用is．
10．their改為his    考查人稱代詞   此處與主語He相呼應(yīng)，指的是：他想讓他的父母高興；故用his．

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