Question

【題目】最近一位教師的十字辭職信引起了人們的熱議："The world is so big. I wanna have a look.（世界這么大，我想去看看）"。就此請你寫一篇文章談?wù)劼糜蔚暮锰帯?/span>

【寫作要求】 只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容

【評分標準】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫

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Answer 1

【答案】

With the improvement of our living conditions, more and more people prefer to travel . Just as an old saying goes, “The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only a page” , which means travelling can broaden our horizons. Besides, we may meet those who have the same interest with us and develop a lifelong friendship while travelling. What’s more, we can learn much knowledge through traveling, thus enriching our experiences. Finally, travel is the best way of pastime, through which we can enjoy eating various food , seeing beautiful scenery and relax ourselves.

【解析】本文是一篇提綱作文。成文時要注意：1. 要點要全面；2. 只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；3.介紹當(dāng)前的社會現(xiàn)象使用一般現(xiàn)在時；4.注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和過渡句，以使行文連貫，順暢；5.盡量使用非謂語短語，介詞短語以及定語從句，狀語從句等包含信息量大的長句，以增加文章亮點。

【亮點說明】文章要點全面，語言通順，很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。使用的句型有定語從句who have the same interest with us and develop a lifelong friendship while travelling，介詞短語With the improvement of our living conditions，和俗語”The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only a page 等。