Question

假設(shè)你是李莉，一位18歲的女孩，英語(yǔ)成績(jī)非常突出，有兩年英語(yǔ)家教的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，現(xiàn)在是“愛(ài)心俱樂(lè)部”的成員。你認(rèn)為志愿者工作能使人樹(shù)立自信，培養(yǎng)交往技能，鍛煉自己的能力�？吹较旅孢@則招聘信息，你愿意利用這次機(jī)會(huì)，為需要幫助的兒童做些事情；同時(shí)增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí)，了解社會(huì)。?

A Voluntary Activity?

in the Winter Vacation?

5 Volunteers?

Wanted?

as English Teachers?

at S.O.S.Children’s Village?

      Those who are interested in taking part in the activity,please send an email to studentunion@bjsz.cn before May 10,2009 explaining your past experiences and purposes for applying.?

                                                      Students’ Union

注意：1. 根據(jù)中英文提示完成下面的英文郵件，書(shū)信的格式要完整；

       2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；?

       3.詞數(shù)120~150(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

    參考詞匯：tutor(vt. & n.)家教；Loving Heart Club愛(ài)心俱樂(lè)部

Answer 1

Dear Students’ Union,?

    I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I saw it?

Dear Students’ Union,?

    I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I saw it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers of the five.Now I’m writing here to apply for this opportunity.?

    I am Li Li,a girl of 18.I have a good command of English and for two years I have been tutoring two school children in English. Presently,I work as a member of Loving

Heart Club in our school.Voluntary work has helped me build confidence and good communication skills.?

    In my opinion,being a volunteer teacher is obviously more than just teaching;furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizon and improve our understanding of the world.That’s why I’d like to take this opportunity and make the most of my special talents and interests.By helping those kids,I feel I can make a big difference to

their future and make a small contribution to society.?

  I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application.I’m looking forward to your early reply.?

                                                           Yours sincerely,?                                    

Li Li

解析:

首先弄懂學(xué)生會(huì)的要求和“志愿者”要求，然后按照要求，寫(xiě)出自己符合條件和個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)，注意過(guò)渡和分段。