Question

隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來(lái)越多的家庭擁有了私家車(chē)。你們班同學(xué)就此現(xiàn)象展開(kāi)了一次討論，提出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)和看法。假如你是趙凱，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給《中學(xué)生雙語(yǔ)》報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，客觀介紹這兩種看法。

贊同者認(rèn)為	反對(duì)者認(rèn)為
1. 方便快捷舒適的 交通工具； 2. 反映出生活水平提高，國(guó)家富強(qiáng)； 3. 帶動(dòng)其它行業(yè)發(fā)展。	1. 廢氣污染嚴(yán)重； 2. 影響交通，導(dǎo)致更多事故，危及行人安全； 3. 停車(chē)問(wèn)題日益突出。

注意：1. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。 2. 詞數(shù)：120左右。3. 參考詞匯：危及endanger

Dear Editor,

                                                                           

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether or not it is good for families to own cars.

With the improvement of people’s living conditions, more and more families have their own cars. Some of us think it’s good to own a car, as a car provides convenient, fast and comfortable transport. Also, the increase in the number of car owners shows that people are becoming richer, and that the country is becoming stronger. Thirdly, the fact that people buy cars makes other industries develop faster.

However, some other students have a different opinion. They think that cars give off waste gas and make the air polluted. They also said that too many cars would cause traffic jams, lead to more accidents and endanger people’s lives. Finally, they said that parking is another big problem.

In short, people should think twice before buying a car.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。