第二節(jié) 讀寫任務 (共1小題,滿分25分)

閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

The Power of Appreciation

Lilly was a French Canadian girl who grew up in the farming community. When she was 16, she had to drop school. With English as her second language and poor education, the future didn’t look bright for Lilly.

Lilly’s father told Lilly to find a job. One day, Lilly saw a sign at a big company. Cautiously, she knocked on her very first door. In her broken English, Lilly told the office manager she was interested in the secretarial position. The manage decided to give her a chance. He directed her to type a single letter, and then left. It was 11: 40 a. m. Lilly thought everyone would be leaving for lunch, when she could slip away in the crowd. But she knew she should attempt the letter.

On her first try, Lilly got through one line of five words and made four mistakes. On her second attempt, she completed a full paragraph, but still made many mistakes. She looked at the clock:11:55——five minutes to freedom. Just then, the manager walked in. He came directly over to Lilly, read the letter and said, “Lilly, you’re doing excellent work!”

With those simple words of encouragement, her desire to escape disappeared and her confidence began to grow. Lilly thought, “Well, if he think it’s good, then it must be good. I think I’ll stay!” Lilly did stay——all because someone had given a shy and uncertain girl the gift of self-confidence when she knocked on the door.

寫作內(nèi)容:

1. 請你以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2. 請你以約120詞談談你的看法,內(nèi)容包括:

1) 贊賞的重要性;

2) 介紹具體事例;

3)人們要利用贊賞的力量。

【寫作要求】

1、作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用原文的句子。

2、作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

【評分標準】

概括準確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫。

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Lilly was a girl lacking confidence who hesitated to apply for a job, but a simple sentence "You did great!" from the manager gave her great encouragement, making her succeed at last.

From this story we can see how powerful appreciation is. A smile, a praise word, even an admiring look can make great difference. I remember once I failed an exam and felt depressed, but the teacher said to me “Though you failed this time ,you have already made great progress”. Her words greatly encouraged me and filled me with confidence. I worked even harder and got satisfying results at last.

In my opinion, the sweetest of all sounds is praise, which can not only bring happiness to others but also give them confidence to change for the better. “Praise is like sunlight to the human spirit; without which we cannot flower and grow.”I hope everyone can realize its power and learn to use it.

【解析】本文是一篇議論文。成文時:1.篇章布局:根據(jù)內(nèi)容要求可以分為兩段或者三段。開頭段用大約30個字來概括材料內(nèi)容,然后再表明自己的觀點,盡量使用涵蓋信息量大的長句; 2.時態(tài):介紹事例用一般過去時,發(fā)表觀點看法時使用一般現(xiàn)在時。3.恰當使用連接詞或者插入語以使文章內(nèi)容連貫,層次分明。4.盡量使用高級詞匯和多種句式,以增加文章亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言通順流暢。在文中作者使用了一些短語,如In my opinion, make progress等等,還使用了定語從句which can not only bring happiness to others but also give them confidence to change for the better.和“Praise is like sunlight to the human spirit; without which we cannot flower and grow.”等。

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