一家英語(yǔ)報(bào)社向中學(xué)生征文,主題是“十年后的我”、請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要求和你的想象完成短文、家庭、工作、業(yè)余生活.

注意:1、次數(shù)100左右;2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

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One Possible Version

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇典型的提綱式半開(kāi)放書面表達(dá)。主題是“十年后的我”,這意味著文章的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主,用第一人稱。題干還明確三大要點(diǎn):家庭;工作;生活,因此文章條理非常清楚,可按照順序逐一展開(kāi)話題。考生寫作時(shí)要注意一下幾點(diǎn):

時(shí)態(tài)。以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主。

要點(diǎn)明確。圍繞三大要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)。

使用連接詞。連接詞的使用使文章更加連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文最大的亮點(diǎn)是用了許多高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)。如imagine,Probably,get along well with,take regular exercise,In a word等。文章還使用了很多亮點(diǎn)句式,如I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.使用了賓語(yǔ)從句。I will do a good job in whatever I do也使用了賓語(yǔ)從句。

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