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15．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李津，你校周六上午舉辦了高三學(xué)生成人儀式．在會上你和一位女生代表同學(xué)們發(fā)言，你父親作為家長代表講話．
請你按照以下四幅圖的順序，寫一篇英語日記．描述圖畫內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勛约旱母邢耄?nbsp;（注意：字?jǐn)?shù)不少于100詞）

Yesterday our school held a memorable adulthood ceremony themed"growth，gratitude and responsibility"．（高分句型一）
I was honoured to be the host of ceremony，together with a girl．In the beginning，on behalf of all the students we expressed our gratitude to our parents and teachers．（高分句型二） Then a parents representative made a speech，expressing the best wishes and expectations to us，which made us feel the love and care from our teachers and parents．（高分句型三）Afterwards，we took an oath facing the national flag，showing our determination to be a qualified citizen and work hard for our country．Finally，hand by hand，we went through a so-called"Adulthood Gate"，which symbolized that we are all grown-up!（高分句型四）
After the ceremony，I know more about the meaning of the word"adult"，which attaches a responsibility to myself，to my family and to the society．（高分句型五）．

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分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校周六上午舉辦了高三學(xué)生成人儀式．在會上你和一位女生代表同學(xué)們發(fā)言，你父親作為家長代表講話．請你按照以下四幅圖的順序，寫一篇英語日記．描述圖畫內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勛约旱母邢�，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：together with和…一起；on behalf of代表；made a speech做演講；Afterwards在…之后；Finally最后；hand by hand手挽手；
Yesterday our school held a memorable adulthood ceremony themed"growth，gratitude and responsibility"．（高分句型一）
 It the beginning，on behalf of all the students we expressed our gratitude to our parents and teachers．（高分句型二）
Then a parents representative made a speech，expressing the best wishes and expectations to us，which made us feel the love and care from our teachers and parents．（高分句型三）
Finally，hand by hand，we went through a so-called"Adulthood Gate"，which symbolized that we are all grown-up!（高分句型四）
After the ceremony，I know more about the meaning of the word"adult"，which attaches a responsibility to myself，to my family and to the society．（高分句型五）

解答 Yesterday our school held a memorable adulthood ceremony themed"growth，gratitude and responsibility"．（高分句型一）
       I was honoured to be the host of ceremony，together with a girl．In the beginning，on behalf of all the students we expressed our gratitude to our parents and teachers．（高分句型二） Then a parents representative made a speech，expressing the best wishes and expectations to us，which made us feel the love and care from our teachers and parents．（高分句型三）Afterwards，we took an oath facing the national flag，showing our determination to be a qualified citizen and work hard for our country．Finally，hand by hand，we went through a so-called"Adulthood Gate"，which symbolized that we are all grown-up!（高分句型四）
       After the ceremony，I know more about the meaning of the word"adult"，which attaches a responsibility to myself，to my family and to the society．（高分句型五）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．