Question

18．假如你是中學(xué)生李華．在一位叫WolfDad 的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容、寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)．
I'm the father of a sixteen-year-old boy．I have a rule for my son：be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another．He has been doing very well in school，but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him．Am I wrong？
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．表明自己的看法；
2．陳述自己的理由（可舉例說明）；
3．提出至少兩條建議；
4．詞數(shù)120 左右．
Hi，WolfDad，
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                                                           Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一封回信，也是一篇半開放性的作文．題材比較新穎，對(duì)考生的要求也比較高，要求考生根據(jù)前一封信篩選要點(diǎn)，學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不是衡量學(xué)生的唯一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，應(yīng)該讓學(xué)生自由發(fā)展這應(yīng)該是回信的要點(diǎn)所在．在寫作時(shí)要注意使用較高級(jí)的詞匯如mentally and physically，也應(yīng)該使用一些好的關(guān)聯(lián)詞如Furthermore等．
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
be ignored 被忽視
turn out 結(jié)果是，事實(shí)證明是
by no means 絕不是
mentally and physically 身心
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China．
句中what連接主語從句．
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission，development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude should never be ignored．
句中although連接讓步狀語從句．
The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities．
句中that連接表語從句．

解答 Hi，WolfDad，
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China．（高分句型一）My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so．（表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)）
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission，development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude should never be ignored．（高分句型二）There are many examples around us．Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected．The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities．（高分句型三）Furthermore，punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically．（陳述理由）
So I suggest that you take your friends'advice．More importantly，let him live like a lovely boy；let him have more friends and social activities；and let him make mistakes of his own as the teenagers often do．（提出建議）
Yours，
Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對(duì)；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．