Question

6．假定你是李華，你班即將舉行英語晚會，你想邀請外教Jill Robbins參加．請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：
1．真誠邀請；
2．介紹內容；
3．赴約時間．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Miss Jill Robbins，
I'm writing to give you a sincere invitation．In order to improve our English and enjoy ourselves，we have decided to hold an English evening party．（高分句型一）I'm honoured to invite you to our party，where you will enjoy English songs and dances．（高分句型二）We will be very happy if you can come and join us in the singing and dancing．
The party is to start at 8 p．m．tomorrow in the conference hall．If it is convenient for you，I'll pick you upat 7：30 tomorrow evening at the school gate．（高分句型三）I am sure you will have a good time then!We hope for your coming whole-heartedly．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，你班即將舉行英語晚會，你想邀請外教Jill Robbins參加．請給他寫封郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：真誠邀請；介紹內容；赴約時間．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：In order to 以便；pick you up去接你；have a good time過得愉快；whole-heartedly衷心地；
In order to improve our English and enjoy ourselves，we have decided to hold an English evening party．（高分句型一）
I'm honoured to invite you to our party，where you will enjoy English songs and dances．（高分句型二）
If it is convenient for you，I'll pick you up at 7：30 tomorrow evening at the school gate．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Miss Jill Robbins，
      I'm writing to give you a sincere invitation．In order to improve our English and enjoy ourselves，we have decided to hold an English evening party．（高分句型一）I'm honoured to invite you to our party，where you will enjoy English songs and dances．（高分句型二）We will be very happy if you can come and join us in the singing and dancing．
      The party is to start at 8 p．m．tomorrow in the conference hall．If it is convenient for you，I'll pick you up at 7：30 tomorrow evening at the school gate．（高分句型三）I am sure you will have a good time then!We hope for your coming whole-heartedly．
       I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．