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【題目】隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展和人們生活水平的提高，近年各地旅游景點(diǎn)人滿為患，尤其是一些歷史名勝，如長(zhǎng)城、紫禁城和各地大型博物館等等。看到這種趨勢(shì)，一些旅游景點(diǎn)開(kāi)始考慮提高門票，并把此消息在各大網(wǎng)站上發(fā)布，這在全國(guó)引起了一場(chǎng)熱烈的討論，觀點(diǎn)如下：

支持者：	1. 促進(jìn)當(dāng)?shù)亟?jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展。 2. 景點(diǎn)需要雇傭更多的工作人員提供服務(wù)并盡快清理游客留下的垃圾。 3. 門票提高可以確保建筑物的維修。
反對(duì)者：	1. 人們將失去休閑放松的地方。 2. 阻礙人們尤其是青少年了解中國(guó)的歷史和文化。 3. 對(duì)于有歷史意義的名勝政府應(yīng)該提供經(jīng)濟(jì)援助，而不是依賴民眾多掏腰包。
你的觀點(diǎn)：	表明態(tài)度，列舉至少兩點(diǎn)理由

參考詞匯：maintenance 維修（n.） financial 經(jīng)濟(jì)的，金融的

注意：1. 對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2. 字?jǐn)?shù)150左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

With the development of our country’s economy and the people’s living standards improving,a lot of tourism attractions in different areas have witnessed a great increase of tourists in recent years， in which case some tourism sites are considering adopting higher tickets fees and have given out the news on various websites. People have held a heated discussion about it and opinions on it are divided ._____________________________.

Answer 1

【答案】

With the development of our country’s economy and the people’s living conditions improving,a lot of tourism attractions in different areas have witnessed a great increase of tourists in recent years， in which case some tourism sites cre considering adopting higher ticket fees and have given out the news on various websites. People have held a heated discussion about it and opinions on it are divided.

The supporters think the first reason is that the increase of ticket fees can promote the local economy. Secondly, the tourist attractions need more employees to provide timely service and remove the garbages left by the tourists as quickly as possible.Besides,the maintenance of the buildings also needs a large amount of money.

On the other hand, those who are against it list their reasons as follows.First of all,it will make people lose the places for relaxation. Next, this move will discourage people especially teenagers from learning about the Chinese history and culture. Last but not least, faced with this situation, our government rather than the average public are supposed to give financial support.

However, I’m on the side of those opponents. Because we need some opportunities to enrich our life and broaden our horizon. In addition, I must remind those tourists who have the habit to litter around to watch their behavior in public places, which can more or less reduce the work of the tourism sites.

【解析】

試題分析：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文的主題是對(duì)熱門景點(diǎn)門票上漲的討論，給出了主要的觀點(diǎn)，學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】學(xué)生要根據(jù)提綱寫出全部的觀點(diǎn)并添加自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子：promote， timely service，rather than而不是，a large amount of，discourage，on the side of，broaden our horizon開(kāi)闊眼界，litter around亂扔垃圾，句型豐富多變：the first reason is that the increase of ticket fees can promote the local economy表語(yǔ)從句，who are against it list their reasons as follows.定語(yǔ)從句，who have the habit to litter around定語(yǔ)從句，which can more or less reduce the work of the tourism sites.非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，文章的一大特色是運(yùn)用了多樣的連接詞，比如：Secondly，Besides，On the other hand，Next，Last but not least，In addition使得文章條理清晰、結(jié)構(gòu)明了。