Question

Yesterday morning I was going to school on our foot with Li Ming.    1.   

We were talking and laughing happily on the way while a motor-bike   2.   

knocked me off my bike. As a result, I seriously hurt in the left leg     3.  

and could hardly stand up. Seen this, Li Ming jumped off his bike, put it   4.   

aside, stopped a taxi and took me to the hospital at once. In the hospital, a 5.   

doctor gave me quick examination. I was told that I had to stay there for   6.   

some time. So Li Ming went out and ring up my parents. He told them what 7.     

had happened to me in the street. He didn’t leave the hospital until his parents 8

arrived. I stayed in the hospital a whole day until later in the afternoon.    9.   

Luckily, I can walk as better as before now. I must thank Li Ming for his help.10. 

Answer 1

1. our 去掉

2. while 改為when

3. I 后面加was

4. Seen 改為seeing

5. 正確

6. quick 前面加a

7. ring 改為rang

8. his 改為my

9. a 前面加for

10. better 改為well

解析:

1. 因為on foot 是固定詞組“步行”

2. 這里是be doing…when 固定結(jié)構(gòu)，表示“正在做某事時另外一件事情發(fā)生了”

3. 這里應該是被動語態(tài)“be hurt ” “受傷”

4. seeing 的邏輯主語就是主句的主語Li Ming

5.正確

6. examination是名詞，所以前面要加a

7. and 并列句前后成分應該是一致的

8. 這是一個邏輯性的錯誤

9. 這里表示時間用“for”

10. as…as 中間應該用原級，修飾walk 用副詞well