【題目】假設你是李華,你的筆友Jack來信告訴你他想和幾個同學開一家網(wǎng)上書店,想征求你的意見。請根據(jù)以下要點給Jack寫一封回信。

1. 好處:可以學會理財及與人溝通,自己看書更方便等;

2. 劣勢:占用比較多的時間,經(jīng)驗不足,市場把握不好等;

3. 提出建議。

注意:1. 詞數(shù)120左右;

2. 可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;

3. 開頭語與結尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jack,

I was very happy to receive your letter telling me about your plan of opening an online bookstore with some classmates.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,

I was very happy to receive your letter telling me about your plan of opening an online bookstore with some classmates.

It would be a great idea because you can learn how to manage money and how to communicate with others effectively. Besides,it will be easier for you to read new books so that you can learn more. However,opening an online bookstore will take up a lot of your spare time. Apart from this,you have little experience in the field and if you don’t know what books are in demand,you may lose some money.

I think you should do some research first and learn how to run an online bookstore.What’s more,you’d better do the business during holidays.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you again.

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文,要求寫一份回信,給出朋友Jack要開辦網(wǎng)上書店的想法的建議。要點都已經(jīng)給出,書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括,不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點只是提綱,考生可根據(jù)想法擴充一些細節(jié)內容,但要合理,與要點不沖突。同時注意謀篇布局的順序,運用合適的連接詞連接全文,同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。審題時注意本文以現(xiàn)在時和將來時為主,描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言,運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型,可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。還要用適當?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來,這樣文章顯得更連貫。

【亮點說明】本篇范文結構合理,涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了大量的連貫性過渡性詞語,比如besides,however,apart from,what’s more等。這些詞語的使用使得文章連貫流暢,整體性和邏輯性都非常好。

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