【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My favorite proverb is “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” It mean that true friends always come to you when you’re in trouble. Last term, my father met with a traffic accident, but his right leg got injured seriously. Consequently, he received the operation and I had to look after him in the hospital. Learned about this, Li Lei was offered to take care of my father without hesitation. He also helped me make up for my missing lessons. Thank to his help and inspiration, I went through the difficulty period and regained confidence. However, a true friend always spares no effort help you when you are in trouble. We all should try to make so good friends.

【答案】

【解析】

第一處：mean→means 考查動(dòng)詞的第三人稱單數(shù)的用法。It在句中作主語(yǔ)，指代上文的諺語(yǔ)“A friend in need is a friend indeed”，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)，并且句子是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以mean要用第三人稱單數(shù)形式，故將mean改為means。

第二處：but→and 考查并列連詞的用法。前面說(shuō)到“我父親偶遇車禍”，后面提到“他的右腿受傷嚴(yán)重”，所以前后應(yīng)該是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將but改為and。

第三處：the→an 考查冠詞的用法。因?yàn)?/span>“我父親腿部受傷”，所以接受了一個(gè)手術(shù)。第一次提到手術(shù)，要用an，不能用定冠詞the，故將the改為an。

第四處：Learned→Leaning 考查分詞的用法。本句中句子的主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是后面的Li Lei，和learn為主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以應(yīng)該使用learn的主動(dòng)形式，也就是說(shuō)要用現(xiàn)在分詞，而不是過(guò)去分詞。故將Learned改為L(zhǎng)earning。

第五處：去掉offered前面的was 考查動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)態(tài)的用法。這里是李雷主動(dòng)照顧“我父親”，所以應(yīng)該用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，故將offered前面的was去掉。

第六處：Thank→Thanks 考查固定搭配。thanks to是固定搭配，所以要在Thank后面加上s，故將Thank改為Thanks。

第七處：difficulty→difficult 考查形容詞的用法。這里應(yīng)該用形容詞修飾名詞period，指“困難的時(shí)期”，所以應(yīng)該將名詞difficulty改為形容詞形式difficult。

第八處：However→Therefore 考查副詞的用法。此處是承接、總結(jié)前面的話，所以前后應(yīng)該是因果關(guān)系，故將However改為Therefore。

第九處：在help前加to 考查動(dòng)詞不定式的用法。spare no effort to do是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是“不遺余力做某事”，這里表示目的，所以要在help之前加上to。

第十處：so→such so修飾形容詞或副詞。such修飾單數(shù)或復(fù)數(shù)名詞。friends是名詞，所以應(yīng)該用such修飾。故將so改為such。

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