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【題目】短文改錯：假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號( )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意： ①每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；②只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was completely free then, The am so I will say “Yes”, I will arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 pm in Friday evening.
In December of 2006, I was the single parent raising my daughter whom was six years old at the time. I didn't have much money, and I wanted to buy a Christmas tree. I took my daughter along with me. As we were choosing a Christmas tree within my budget, my daughter wanted a tall tree than that planned one. I told my daughter we can't afford a taller tree. Someone must have heard of our conversation. When I went to paying for the tree, the clerk said the customer before me had paid for my tree. I shocked. I was very thankful to what the stranger had done for us. That day I promised to me that I would pay it forward.

Answer 1

【答案】the錯誤；改為a；whom錯誤；改為who；and錯誤；改為but；tall錯誤；改為taller；can’t錯誤；改為couldn't；去掉heard后面的of；paying錯誤；改為pay；shocked前面加was；to錯誤；改為for；me錯誤；改為myself。
【解析】 通過本文的閱讀和改錯，考查學(xué)生的固定搭配和動詞時態(tài)和語態(tài)、非謂語動詞的用法、定語從句、連詞、形容詞比較等級、冠詞的用法等。
①the錯誤；改為a 句意：當(dāng)時我是一個帶著六歲女兒的單親。此處用a表一個身份。
②whom 錯誤；改為who 句意：我是一個單親的撫養(yǎng)著一個當(dāng)時只有6歲的女兒。whom was six years old at the time.一應(yīng)該是定語從句，修飾先行詞my daughter，先行詞在本從句中做主語應(yīng)該用關(guān)系代詞who，whom做賓語。
③and錯誤；改為but 句意：雖然我沒有多少錢，當(dāng)時我還是想買一個圣誕樹。前后表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以用but。
④tall錯誤；改為taller 根據(jù)下一句I told my daughter we can't afford a taller tree.可知，這里的意思是：女兒想要一個比我計劃更高的樹，所以用比較級taller。
⑤can't錯誤；改為couldn't told后面是賓語從句，時態(tài)應(yīng)該也用過去式和主語一致，所以用couldn't。
⑥去掉heard后面的of hear聽到，后面可以跟賓語從句，hear of 的意思是：聽說。這里的意思是：一定是有人聽到我們母女的談話了。
⑦paying錯誤；改為pay go to后面用動詞原形表目的。
⑧shocked前面加was 本句句意：我很吃驚 。shocked是形容詞前面要加系動詞was構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。
⑨t(yī)o錯誤；改為for be thankful for 的意思是：因為…而感謝。這里感謝是因為一個陌生人為我們的付出。
⑩me錯誤；改為myself 句意：我對自己承諾：我要把這份付出傳下去。用反身代詞做賓語。