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20．網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物逐漸成為我們生活的一個(gè)有機(jī)部分，請(qǐng)你用英文給China Daily寫一封信，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的利弊以及你的看法．
要點(diǎn)如下：
1．優(yōu)點(diǎn)（方便、快捷、質(zhì)優(yōu)、價(jià)廉）；
2．缺點(diǎn)（質(zhì)量無法保證、售后態(tài)度不好）；
3．你的看法．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear editor，
With the fast development of e-commerce，online shopping is increasingly becoming an unavoidable part of our life．The popularity of online shopping definitely has its own reasons．First and foremost，online shopping usually means something you buy are both cheaper in price and better in quality．（高分句型一）Besides，goods you get online come to you fast as well as conveniently，saving your tiredness of shopping and walking．（高分句型二）But the other side of the coin is also true．Goods bought online are not as fine as those from the store which you can watch，feel and smell by yourself．Some online shoppers become impatient or even unreasonable after you have paid for the goods．（高分句型三）
In my opinion，we should improve our e-commerce laws to regulate the activities of online purchase．Meanwhile，as online customers，we should be cautious while shopping online．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物逐漸成為我們生活的一個(gè)有機(jī)部分，請(qǐng)你用英文給China Daily寫一封信，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的利弊以及你的看法．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：優(yōu)點(diǎn)（方便、快捷、質(zhì)優(yōu)、價(jià)廉）；缺點(diǎn)（質(zhì)量無法保證、售后態(tài)度不好）；你的看法． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象
．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要
表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：With the fast development of 隨著…的發(fā)展；First and foremost首先并重要的是；Besides另外；In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來看；Meanwhile同時(shí)；
First and foremost，online shopping usually means something you buy are both cheaper in price and better in quality．（高分句型一）
Besides，goods you get online come to you fast as well as conveniently，saving your tiredness of shopping and walking．（高分句型二）
Some online shoppers become impatient or even unreasonable after you have paid for the goods．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear editor，
       With the fast development of e-commerce，online shopping is increasingly becoming an unavoidable part of our life．
       The popularity of online shopping definitely has its own reasons．First and foremost，online shopping usually means something you buy are both cheaper in price and better in quality．（高分句型一）Besides，goods you get online come to you fast as well as conveniently，saving your tiredness of shopping and walking．（高分句型二）But the other side of the coin is also true．Goods bought online are not as fine as those from the store which you can watch，feel and smell by yourself．Some online shoppers become impatient or even unreasonable after you have paid for the goods．（高分句型三）
       In my opinion，we should improve our e-commerce laws to regulate the activities of online purchase．Meanwhile，as online customers，we should be cautious while shopping online．
       Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．