Question

【題目】請以Thank you, My Friend!為題，寫一篇不少于120詞的短文。

要求：

1. 描述你與朋友之間發(fā)生的一件事。

2. 談?wù)劥耸聨Ыo你的啟示。

注意：不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Thank you, my friend!

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Answer 1

【答案】

Thank you, my friend!

There is no doubt that there exist some unforgettable memories between everyone and his friend. I am no different. A thing done by my best friend will never fade from my memory.

One day, while playing football with my classmates, I got injured, leading to the fact that I was unable to walk. In that case, my best friend Xiao Ming offered to help me. For a whole week, he carried me on his back from the dormitory to the classroom. Besides, he looked after me in my daily life, such as buying dishes and washing clothes for me. Thanks to his care, I recovered soon.

A friend is one who always lends you a helping hand when you are in trouble. It is with their help that we can overcome the difficulty in our life. Thank you, my friend and I swear to become a person like you.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇夾敘夾議的議論文。要求在清楚的記敘某些事情后再開始描寫經(jīng)過這些事情所帶來的感受和啟示。所以，對于事件的記敘和描述力求簡潔明了，不要拖沓；對于議論部分，要求觀點立場明確。題目給的范文：第一段簡潔明了，開門見山，開啟下文；接下來第二段就開始描述自己的經(jīng)歷；第三段就這件經(jīng)歷過的事情發(fā)表自己的看法和立場。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了，給人簡潔有力之感。短語，像There is no doubt that；In that case；For a whole week；such as；swear to…等的應(yīng)用，使行文更加連貫并且能提升文章的檔次。