Question

4．下面短文中共有10處語言錯誤，請在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不給分．
Dear schoolmates，
In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and improve our sense to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest． A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31st． Remember，you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper，that is very  popular among high school student． The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline．
Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time．
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 這是學(xué)生會倡議學(xué)生參加中國日報舉行的關(guān)于環(huán)境保護的知識競賽的倡議書，知識競賽于十月十四日開始，十月三十一日結(jié)束，同學(xué)們可以從報紙上參加競賽，
然后剪下答案紙在截止期限之前機會中國日報社．

解答 Dear schoolmates，
In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and improve our sense to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to
                                                         attach                                                                                                                           去掉and
hold an interestinglyknowledge contest． A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31st． Remember，you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper，
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thatis very popular among high school student． The answer sheet must∧cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline．
which                                                 students                                     be                                                                     before
Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time．
Students'Union．                                                                                                                it

1．a(chǎn)ttaching改為attach；考查不定式，不定式to后面跟動詞原形．
2．去掉and；考查連詞，and連接兩個并列成分，這里前句是一個目的狀語，沒有并列成分，故去掉and．kao
3．interestingly改為interesting；考查形容詞，這里需要修飾的是knowledge contest，所以用形容詞interesting．
4．A改為The；考查冠詞，定冠詞the表特指，指代上句中提到的contest．
5．end改為ends；考查動詞，這里end和前面的starts作并列謂語，所以時態(tài)要與starts保持一致，用ends．
6．that改為which；考查關(guān)系代詞，這里是非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞which在句子中做主語．
7．student改為students；考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)，這里泛指所以高中學(xué)生，這里應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
8．cut前面加be；考查語態(tài)，這里answer sheet被剪掉，應(yīng)當(dāng)用被動語態(tài)，所以cut前面加be．
9．a(chǎn)fter改為before；考查介詞，根據(jù)句意這里應(yīng)是"在截止日期之前"，所以用before．
10．them改為it；考查代詞，這里指代的是前文的knowledge contest，所以用單數(shù)it．

點評 短文改錯時先整體了解文章基本大意，確定短文的基本時態(tài)和語態(tài)，再運用語法，詞匯，習(xí)慣搭配等基礎(chǔ)語言知識進行具體分析，找出文中錯誤加以修改．