Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是高二學(xué)生李華，寒假即將來臨，學(xué)校要求學(xué)生們在寒假期間做件有意義的事情。你和你的好朋友李明商量打算去當(dāng)志愿者，為保護(hù)淥江河做貢獻(xiàn)。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語文章，內(nèi)容包括下面兩個(gè)方面：

1. 淥江河的現(xiàn)狀： ①大量垃圾被扔進(jìn)河里；②大量污水被排放到河里;

2. 辦法及措施（至少兩點(diǎn)）：打撈垃圾 ...

注意：1.詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

The winter holiday is coming. As middle school students, my best friend Li Ming and I are going to do something meaningful.

Answer 1

【答案】The winter holiday is coming.My best friend Li Ming and I are going to do something meaningful.

As can be seen, the Lujiang River is not as clean as it used to be. People throw a large amount of rubbish into the river everyday and many factories pour a great deal of waste water into it, causing a serious water pollution. It is time that we did something to protect the river now.

Along with other volunteers, Li Ming and I will pick up the rubbish floating on the river, which may make the river look cleaner. What’s more, we intend to give a speech in public to increase people’s awareness of protecting our mother river.

Through the efforts of the government and all the citizens in Liling, I’m sure the Lujiang River will take on a new look in the near future.

【解析】這篇短文是一篇提綱類作文，在這篇短文中要表達(dá)一下自己假期為保護(hù)淥江河做貢獻(xiàn)，當(dāng)志愿者的安排，文章主要包括三個(gè)方面，即1. 淥江河的現(xiàn)狀： ①大量垃圾被扔進(jìn)河里；②大量污水被排放到河里;2. 辦法及措施（至少兩點(diǎn)）：打撈垃圾 ...，3.努力的效果。要用自己的話把這三方面的安排表達(dá)清楚，不能遺漏一條。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)來表達(dá)。同時(shí)可以有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，以使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。表達(dá)時(shí)還要注意使用正確的連接詞，使文章表達(dá)連貫、流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇范文書寫規(guī)范，內(nèi)容完整，層次分明。短文分成了四段，第一段先點(diǎn)明了主題，要放假了，要過一個(gè)有意義的假期；第二、三段是中心段，具體表達(dá)了淥江河的現(xiàn)狀和假期做志愿者的安排；第四段是一個(gè)總結(jié)段，點(diǎn)明努力的效果，即淥江河呈現(xiàn)新面貌。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如定語從句：1.As can be seen, the Lujiang River is not as clean as it used to be.2. the river, which may make the river look cleaner.虛擬語氣：It is time that we did something to protect the river now.非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)：waste water into it, causing a serious water pollution.等。