Question

當(dāng)今，社會(huì)上有許多人處于困境需要幫助，因此，越來(lái)越多的人參加志愿工作。請(qǐng)以The benefits of being a volunteer為題寫(xiě)一篇短文談?wù)勀銓?duì)志愿工作好處的看法。主要內(nèi)容如下：
1. 幫助有困難的人們；
2. 更好地了解我們周圍的世界；
3. 學(xué)到知識(shí)，獲取經(jīng)驗(yàn)；
……
注意: 1. 內(nèi)容包括以上要點(diǎn)，但不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)拓展；
2. 字?jǐn)?shù)120詞左右。
3. 參考詞匯：volunteering 義工工作/志愿工作

Answer 1

Today, more and more people in the world take part in volunteering. It’s very meaningful and wonderful. In my opinion, we can gain a lot from the activity.
First, we can help others who are in trouble. We can understand better with each other. The smiles of the people can make us feel happy and encourage us in return. Second, we can have a better understanding of the world, such as the earth, animals, environment and so on. A lot of knowledge can be gained in our mind. Third, during volunteering, we can acquire much experience. We can open our hearts when communicating with others. We can handle the difficulties better and more effectively. Of course, we can gain a lot more besides what are mentioned above. So, let’s go to be a volunteer. (w134)

試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇提綱作文。提綱作文寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如take part in，in one’s opinion，in trouble，in return, have a better understanding of , and so on；并注意了句子的銜接如：first，second，third，such as ，so等等。