Question

15．假定你是新華中學高二學生李華，對校園中存在的隨意涂寫（scribble v．）和亂丟垃圾（litter v．）的行為感到不滿，請用英文給校長寫封信．
1．說明寫信的目的．
2．提出建議．（至少兩條）
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100左右：2．可適當增加細節(jié)．
Dear Mr．Headmaster，
I am Li Hua，a student from Xinhua high school，Senior II．I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students：littering and scribbling，which makes our school dirty and unpleasant．And it does harm to the image of our school．I always feel ashamed whenever I see this．
It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about．I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior．At the same time，students should be encouraged to develop good habits and behave themselves better．I believe that，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future．
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，本文只給出了主要寫作要點．寫作中要注意從兩個方面進行敘述，并自己補充一到兩點．動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關鍵單詞等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順．寫作中注意使用連接詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系．
亮點句型一：．I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students：littering and scribbling，which makes our school dirty and unpleasant．我想提請你注意一些不正當?shù)男袨樵谖覀儗W生：亂扔垃圾和涂鴉，這使得我們學校的骯臟和不愉快．這是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代的是前邊整個句子的意思．
亮點句型二：I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration．如果您能考慮我的建議，我將不勝感激．I would appreciate it if是英語的固定句型，意思是：如果…我將不勝感激．

解答 Dear Mr．Headmaster，
I am Li Hua，a student from Xinhua high school，Senior II．I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students：littering and scribbling，which makes our school dirty and unpleasant．（亮點句型一）And it does harm to the image of our school．I always feel ashamed whenever I see this．
It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about．I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior．At the same time，students should be encouraged to develop good habits and behave themselves better．I believe that，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future．
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration．（亮點句型二）
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．