Question

假如你叫李華，即將高中畢業(yè)，準備到美國讀大學。現在你有一些關于SAT考試（美國大學入學考試）的問題需要咨詢，請你寫一封e-mail向你的美國朋友Peter請教你所關注的以下問題：
1. SAT考試的時間和主要內容；
2. 應該如何準備閱讀、寫作等考試項目；
3. 希望對方推薦一些備考資源。
注意：（1）詞數不少于80；
（2）在答題卡上作答；
（3）書信格式及開頭均已給出（不計入總詞數）。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing these days?                                           
                                                                      
                                                                      
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
How are you doing these days? I am writing to ask you something about SAT, as I am about to graduate from high school and apply for an American university. The questions I would like to know about are as follows.
What does SAT generally involve? Could you please give me some suggestions on how I should prepare for it, especially reading and writing, which I have the greatest difficulty in? As for references, do you happen to know some of help? If so, recommend them to me, will you? Books, websites and anything you can think of will do.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could kindly extend your help. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析： 考察提綱類作文。是為了詢問美國朋友Peter關于SAT考試得有關內容，要點文章都已經給了出來。寫好提綱類作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】：本文充分運用了疑問句，如How are you doing these days? When does SAT take place every year?這些疑問句都起著很好的引領下文的作用。高級詞匯運用得也教多，如graduate from，reference等；高級句式如I would greatly appreciate it if….；The questions I would like to know about are as follows.等！