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【題目】面對中學生“出國熱”，社會對此有不同的看法。請你以Studying Abroad為題，根據(jù)以下提供的信息，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>

advantages	disadvantages
1．良好的語言環(huán)境，更利于語言學習。 2．拓寬視野，學習國外先進的科學技術(shù)。 3．傳播各民族間的不同文化。	1．年紀小，缺乏生活經(jīng)驗，自立能力差。 2．情感孤獨，思鄉(xiāng)。 3．生活學習費用高。

注意：1．第一句已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2．詞數(shù)100左右

3．參考詞匯：媒介，中間人mediator 民族 nation 費用 expense

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.

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Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign countries to study. Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are many advantages in attending schools abroad. First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries. Third, we can learn much foreign languages more quickly.

However, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live alone without any living experience. Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick. Also, of course, the costs are much higher there than at home. In spite of theses, advantages are more than disadvantages.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類作文。主要內(nèi)容是寫出出國的優(yōu)缺點，優(yōu)點包括：1.良好的語言環(huán)境，更利于語言學習。2．拓寬視野，學習國外先進的科學技術(shù)。3．傳播各民族間的不同文化。缺點包括：1．年紀小，缺乏生活經(jīng)驗，自立能力差。2．情感孤獨，思鄉(xiāng)。3．生活學習費用高。還需要注意：1．第一句已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。 2．詞數(shù)100左右。

【亮點說明】：文章用了三段式的結(jié)構(gòu)，開門見山的寫出了出國熱這一話題，寫出了文章要求的優(yōu)點，缺點等。運用了一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在完成時等時態(tài)。用了besides,also,of course等連詞使文章更加流暢，運用了in spite of等高級短語，使文章添色。