Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你校外教露西女士近期準(zhǔn)備回英國度假，你班同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備舉行晚會為她送行。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一封e-mail，通知她相關(guān)情況。

1、對她的辛勤教學(xué)工作表示感謝；

2、晚會本周六晚上6：30開始，預(yù)計持續(xù)一個小時；

3、地點(diǎn)：高三12班教室；

4、活動：一起唱英文歌，班長代表全班贈送鮮花和親手制作的禮物。

注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文更連貫。

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。（不計入總詞數(shù)）

Dear Lucy,

We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much during your absence!_________________________________

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lucy

We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much during your absence!

Firstly, I’d like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class! So we have decided to have a farewell party this Saturday for you. The party will start at 6:30 on Saturday evening in the classroom of Class 12, Grade 3 and will probably last about an hour. All of the class hope you can join us singing some English songs and have a good time together. At the end of the party, the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts, which are mostly made by ourselves.

We wish you a plain journey back home! We are also expecting you to come back to China again soon.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)已給出。成文時要注意：1.文章主要用第一人稱；2.時態(tài)：靈活變換；3.文章的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全：（1）對她的辛勤教學(xué)工作表示感謝；（2）晚會本周六晚上6：30開始，預(yù)計持續(xù)一個小時；（3）地點(diǎn)：高三12班教室；（4）活動：一起唱英文歌，班長代表全班贈送鮮花和親手制作的禮物。4.注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.注意使用一些連接詞，使得文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。6.注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)控制，100單詞左右。

亮點(diǎn)說明：例文當(dāng)中使用了過渡詞firstly等，其次使用了express one’s gratitude for sth,present等短語與詞匯，文章表述清楚，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式多樣，要點(diǎn)齊全。