【題目】假設(shè)你的英文報(bào)紙Teens的編輯Collins, 讀者李華寫信告訴你他對(duì)高中學(xué)校生活的壓力和父母整天的嘮叨感到很厭煩，打算綴學(xué)外出打工，到社會(huì)上闖蕩一下。 請用英文給他寫一封信勸說他放棄這個(gè)念頭并給出自己的建議。文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．參考詞匯：闖蕩 make a living away from home

Dear Li Hua,

This is Collins from Teens . I’m sorry to hear form you that youplan to drop out and find a job away from your parents.

Ours Sincerely

Collins

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

This is Collins from Teens. I’m sorry to hear from you that you plan to drop out and find a job away from your parents. It is a very dangerous idea for a teenager like you to intend to make a living away from home.

As a high school student, it is natural for us to meet problems in our school life. Both our teachers and parents show their love for us every day in the form of praises, criticisms or even complaints. We should be aware of it and grateful to it.

In my opinion, the most important duty for you today is to learn knowledge and learn how to deal with different difficulties at home and at school. To face the unknown world is our next step after graduation.

I hope my idea will be useful to you.

Ours Sincerely

Collins

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇郵件應(yīng)用文，本文是一篇?jiǎng)裾f信，要注意語氣符合自己的身份，以及注意勸說的語氣，不能太過強(qiáng)硬，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、內(nèi)容提示較簡潔，只是框架，但學(xué)生容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌趯懽髦氨匦拚J(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)；2、要注意給出自己的建議并且結(jié)合生活實(shí)際；3、再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章符合勸說的語氣和口吻，要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，知識(shí)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿唬闹惺褂昧朔浅：玫亩陶Z和句子為文章增色不少，比如drop out輟學(xué)，make a living生活，meet problems遇到困難，be aware of意識(shí)到，In my opinion在我看來等。還運(yùn)用了一些好的句型，如 It is a very dangerous idea for a teenager like you to intend to make a living away from home運(yùn)用了形式主語，To face the unknown world is our next step after graduation.非謂語動(dòng)詞做主語。文章的格式符合書信，結(jié)尾I hope my idea will be useful to you.表達(dá)了自己真心幫助的感情。

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