【題目】自微信開發(fā)了紅包電子支付以來，電子紅包開始在中國手機(jī)用戶中流行開來。借助網(wǎng)絡(luò)時代的新方法，電子紅包給中國傳統(tǒng)紅包賦予了新的意義。請針對這一現(xiàn)象，寫120詞左右的的作文。

內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

1．簡要描述這一社會現(xiàn)象

2．分析微信紅包的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)（方便，增添歡樂…過度沉迷，浪費(fèi)時間…）

3．闡述你的看法

參考詞匯：壓歲錢：gifting money 微信：We Chat 電子紅包： Red envelopes

電子支付：electronic payments

"Red envelope" fever has swept the country since We Chat came up with a program allowing users to send cash through electronic payments.________________________

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【答案】

"Red envelope" fever has swept the country since We Chat came up with a program allowing users to send cash through electronic payments. This gives the traditions typical of this festive period a facelift as well as some problems.

On the one hand, the brilliant idea takes the Chinese New Year tradition of gifting money into the digital era, which makes gifting money convenient and more accessible to people. What’s more, it can bring people more fun and they can make their friendship with others closer. With electronic red envelopes, you're not limited by your identity or the time of year. On the other hand, electronic red envelopes also attract more teenagers and adults to become hooked on their phones, affecting their social or school life. They spend all their free time surfing and don’t concentrate on work.

In my opinion, "Red envelope" provides a brand new way of communication for people and obviously adds to more fun if used properly.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)已給出，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)文章可分三段來寫：第一段簡要描述這一社會現(xiàn)象；第二段分析微信紅包的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，學(xué)生可結(jié)合自身實際寫；第三段闡述自己的看法。寫作時可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順。同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文是一篇描述社會現(xiàn)象的短文，采用三段式，條理清晰，觀點(diǎn)闡述明確，布局合理，文中使用高級句子。On the one hand, the brilliant idea takes the Chinese New Year tradition of gifting money into the digital era, which makes gifting money convenient and more accessible to people.運(yùn)用非限制性定語從句；On the other hand, electronic red envelopes also attract more teenagers and adults to become hooked on their phones, affecting their social or school life.現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語；obviously adds to more fun if used properly.連詞加過去分詞作狀語使用巧妙；另外，On the one hand, On the other hand, What’s more, In my opinion,的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。

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