【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(Λ)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

My parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day my parent went to work in the fields taken my little sister and Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked to the river. Ah Fu follow her there. She was trying to pick a flower while she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped into the water immediate. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. That was our brave Ah Fu that had saved my little sister.

【答案】1.calling 改為called。

2.parent改為parents。

3. taken改為taking

4. they加were

5. the改為a

6. follow改為followed

7. while改為when

8. immediate改為immediately

9. carried改為carrying

10. That改為It

【解析】第一處：考查動詞-ed形式，他們養(yǎng)了一只叫Ah Fu的狗，及物動詞-ed形式表示被動或完成，這里called作后置定語修飾dog,，表示被動，故將calling改為called.

第二處：考查名詞單復數(shù)，根據(jù)第一句中出現(xiàn)了My parents……，這里也應該是parents, 故將parent改為parents.

第三處：考查動詞-ing形式，句意：一天我的父母去外面工作，也帶著我的小妹妹和Ah Fu一起，動詞-ing形式表示主動或正在進行，這里take的邏輯主語是my parents, 所以主謂之間是邏輯上的主動關系，所以take應使用動詞-ing形式，故將taken改為taking.

第四處：考查過去進行時，句意：當他們在工作的時候，我的妹妹向一條河走去，過去進行時的構成是：was/were+動詞-ing， 故將were加在they的后面.

第五處：考查冠詞，這里的river只是泛指，“一條河流”，而非特指，且river在此處是第一次出現(xiàn)，不能使用定冠詞the, 故將the改為a.

第六處：考查動詞時態(tài)，因為整個段落使用的都是一般過去時，所以follow也要使用過去時，故將follow改為followed.

第七處：考查連詞用法，句意：“在她試圖去摘花的時候，掉進了水里”，while引導的從句中的動詞必須是延續(xù)性動詞，而when引導的從句中的動詞既可以是延續(xù)性動詞也可以是終止性動詞，這里fell是終止性動詞，所以不能用while引導，故將while改為when.

第八處：考查副詞，句意：Ah Fu吠叫著，立馬跳進了水里，可知immediate應該是修飾jumped的，而動詞應該用副詞來修飾，故將immediate改為immediately.

第九處：考查動詞-ing形式，句意：他們看到Ah Fu背著我的小妹妹，游向岸邊，這里主語Ah Fu和謂語carry是邏輯上的主動關系，所以carry應使用動詞-ing形式表示主動，故將carried改為carrying.

第十處：考查指示代詞，句意：它是我們勇敢的Ah Fu, 拯救了我的小妹妹，that指代時間或空間上較遠的人和物，用在這里不合適，故將That改為It.

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