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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】side→sides

【2】from→of

【3】sit→sitting

【4】easy→easily

【5】is→was

【6】them→it

【7】not去掉

【8】hurry前加a

【9】felt→feel

【10】If→Although/Though

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇介紹教室的文章。

【1】side→sides 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。side是可數(shù)名詞，前面有three修飾，故side要改為sides。

【2】from→of 介詞誤用。be made from由……制成，看不出原材料；be made of由……制成/組成，看得出原材料，玻璃是可以看出來的，故把from要改為of。比如The chair is made of wood.椅子是由木頭做成的。而make from的原材料是看不到的，比如Paper is made from the trees.紙張是由木材做成的。木材變紙張是一種化學(xué)變化，從紙上是看不出一棵樹的。

【3】sit→sitting 動(dòng)詞形式錯(cuò)誤。enjoy后用v-ing形式。

【4】easy→easily 詞性錯(cuò)誤。此處用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞see，故easy改為easily。

【5】is→was 時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。全文用的都是過去時(shí)，所以要把is改為was。

【6】them→it 代詞誤用。此處指代前面提到的park，用單數(shù)，故要把them改為it。

【7】not去掉 從句意判斷：從遠(yuǎn)處能欣賞到雪山美景。故把not刪掉。

【8】hurry前加a 考查固定短語。in a hurry急忙。

【9】felt→feel 詞形錯(cuò)誤。make sb．do sth．使某人做某事，所以felt要改為feel。

【10】If→Although/Though 連詞誤用。根據(jù)上下文邏輯關(guān)系，應(yīng)譯成：盡管那個(gè)時(shí)候我只是個(gè)在教室里學(xué)習(xí)的小孩，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記的。表示“讓步”，而不是“條件”，而且翻譯為“如果”上也不通。故把If→Although/Though。

【知識拓展】

含a的固定短語或習(xí)慣用法

have a rest 休息一會兒；have a good time 玩得開心；have a break休息一會兒； in a hurry 匆忙；after a while過了一會兒； once in a while 偶爾；have a good idea 有一個(gè)好主意；as a matter of fact事實(shí)上； in a word總而言之； make a choice 做出選擇；a success一個(gè)成功的人，一件成功的事； a failure一個(gè)失敗的人，一件失敗的事； an honour一個(gè)榮幸的人，一個(gè)榮幸的事； have a good knowledge of 有某方面的好知識。