Question

9．下面是China Daily上有關(guān)大城市是否應(yīng)該限制小汽車數(shù)量報道中的兩種截然不同的觀點．請仔細(xì)閱讀這兩段文字，然后用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕膫�人看法．
注意：
1．觀點要鮮明，論點、論據(jù)充分；
2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫、通順；
3．詞數(shù)：不少于100．
觀點一：More cars mean more pollution and more accidents．Car limitation can avoid building more roads and people living in big cities can be provided with more houses and parks．In this way，people can improve their lives．So it's necessary to limit the number of cars in big cities．
觀點二：More cars mean more jobs and more convenience for people living in big cities．Meanwhile more cars can improve the industry of cars and of course speed up the city's development．So it's unnecessary to limit cars in big cities．
Different people have different ideas about car limitation in big cities．      ．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文話題提出了大城市是否應(yīng)該限制小汽車數(shù)量的問題，給出了兩種觀點．支持者認(rèn)為限制汽車數(shù)量可以改善人們居住環(huán)境，反對者認(rèn)為汽車行業(yè)可以促進(jìn)人們就業(yè)．考生寫作時要注意兩個觀點都要兼顧，最后提出自己的觀點．寫作時盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
重要短語：
 traffic jams 交通堵塞，as our individuals，就我們個人來說，take some measures to do，采取措施做，
高分句子：
1．With the fast development of human society and the improvement of life standard，private car has become more and more common in our country，especially in cities．With加短語做伴隨狀語，是文章常用的開頭句式．
2．Eventually，it is good for us to save more time to improve the efficiency of life．本句中含有重要句型it is good for us to do…，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)做…

解答 With the fast development of human society and the improvement of life standard，private car has become more and more common in our country，especially in cities．（高分句型）It brings some benefit for us but also causes many problems at the same time．（提出話題）
     For one thing，private car has increasingly played a significant role in our daily life．To start with，private cars provide more convenience as a kind of vehicle．Furthermore，with the increase of private cars，the automobile companies can offer more and more job opportunities and reduce the pressure of unemployment．Eventually，it is good for us to save more time to improve the efficiency of life．（高分句型） For example，we do not have to wait for a bus when we are in a hurry．（支持觀點）
     However，for another，private car has caused many problems as well．Firstly，the environment would be heavily polluted if the number of private cars rises too quickly．The exhaust gas from cars pollutes the air and causes some serious problems to human health．Moreover，too many private cars will cause traffic jams instead of bringing convenience．Finally，the increase of traffic accidents has threatened the safety of people's life．（反對觀點）
     As far as I am concerned，as our individuals，we should prefer to choose the public transportations when we go out．And for our government，they should take some measures to limit the increasing number of private cars．（提出自己看法）

點評 要想使自己的書面表達(dá)得高分，首先要做到發(fā)揮自身的優(yōu)勢，使用熟練掌握的句型，避開自己的弱點，盡量做到不犯錯誤或少犯錯誤．考生平時可以多累積高分詞匯和句型．