Question

春節(jié)前的一項調(diào)查結果顯示，在北京、上海等六大城市人群中有近70%受訪者表示“為春節(jié)回家而煩惱”，被稱為“恐歸族”。他們的煩惱在于車票難買、路途遙遠、 假期太短以及組建家庭后回農(nóng)村過年不適應等。
請你根據(jù)以上報道，用英文寫一篇120個詞左右的文章，文章應包括以下內(nèi)容:
1. 報道的內(nèi)容。
2. 你的看法(至少兩點)。
注意：1. 開頭已給出 (不計詞數(shù))。
2. 參考詞匯：恐歸族 home-fear group
According to the results of a survey in six big cities like Beijing and Shanghai before the Spring Festival,
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Answer 1

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According to the results of a survey in six big cities like Beijing and Shanghai before the Spring Festival, nearly 70 percent of the people surveyed have been defined as the “home-fear group”, or those who have deep concerns about going back home for the Spring Festival.
Firstly, most of them find it difficult to buy travel tickets for home. Secondly, some of them say their hometown is too far away and the holidays are too short. Thirdly, others feel they are no longer accustomed to the country life after getting married in the cities.
From my point of view, whether to go back home for the Spring Festival is not just a personal choice, it also reveals many social problems. First, the government seems to have failed to provide a good transportation service for the festival. Second, the development in urban and rural areas is unbalanced. (Finally, holidays should be more flexible to meet the needs of people from a large population). Therefore, the government should take all the above into consideration for the good of public.

試題分析：這是一篇調(diào)查類作文，對大城市的人進行采訪，對于回家過年是什么態(tài)度，寫一篇報道，我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較簡略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多.需要注意不要偏離文章中心.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭結尾,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
點評：本文屬于調(diào)查類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。