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18．假如你是李華，今年春節(jié)去美國旅游度假一周．你的美國朋友Luke招待了你． 請給他寫一封信，表示感謝．要點如下：
1玩得很開心；
2謝謝他的招待；
3邀請其來中國旅游．
注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；
2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢．
Dear Luke，
How are you doing these days？With the deepest gratitude，I am writing to you to express my thanks for your hospitality when I was traveling in America．You know how hard it is for a foreigner to travel in a foreign country alone．（高分句型一）I couldn't imagine what my vacation would be without your help．（高分句型二）I enjoyed myself very much．I will be glad if you can come to China to visit me．I hope we can still keep in touch with each other!I will forever remember the valued time with you．Thank you again and wish everything goes well．
Your sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息年春節(jié)去美國旅游度假一周．你的美國朋友Luke招待了你． 請給他寫一封信，表示感謝，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：玩得很開心；謝謝他的招待；邀請其來中國旅游．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：express my thanks for因為…表達感謝；without your help沒有你的幫助；enjoy myself 過得非常愉快；keep in touch with保持聯(lián)系；You know how hard it is for a foreigner to travel in a foreign country alone．（高分句型一）
I couldn't imagine what my vacation would be without your help．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Luke，
      How are you doing these days？With the deepest gratitude，I am writing to you to express my thanks for your hospitality when I was traveling in America．You know how hard it is for a foreigner to travel in a foreign country alone．（高分句型一）I couldn't imagine what my vacation would be without your help．（高分句型二）I enjoyed myself very much．I will be glad if you can come to China to visit me．I hope we can still keep in touch with each other!I will forever remember the valued time with you．Thank you again and wish everything goes well．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Your sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．