Question

18．假如你是李華，今年春節(jié)去美國(guó)旅游度假一周．你的美國(guó)朋友Luke招待了你． 請(qǐng)給他寫一封信，表示感謝．要點(diǎn)如下：
1玩得很開(kāi)心；
2謝謝他的招待；
3邀請(qǐng)其來(lái)中國(guó)旅游．
注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；
2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢．
Dear Luke，
How are you doing these days？With the deepest gratitude，I am writing to you to express my thanks for your hospitality when I was traveling in America．You know how hard it is for a foreigner to travel in a foreign country alone．（高分句型一）I couldn't imagine what my vacation would be without your help．（高分句型二）I enjoyed myself very much．I will be glad if you can come to China to visit me．I hope we can still keep in touch with each other!I will forever remember the valued time with you．Thank you again and wish everything goes well．
Your sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息年春節(jié)去美國(guó)旅游度假一周．你的美國(guó)朋友Luke招待了你． 請(qǐng)給他寫一封信，表示感謝，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：玩得很開(kāi)心；謝謝他的招待；邀請(qǐng)其來(lái)中國(guó)旅游．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：express my thanks for因?yàn)椤�表達(dá)感謝；without your help沒(méi)有你的幫助；enjoy myself 過(guò)得非常愉快；keep in touch with保持聯(lián)系；You know how hard it is for a foreigner to travel in a foreign country alone．（高分句型一）
I couldn't imagine what my vacation would be without your help．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Luke，
      How are you doing these days？With the deepest gratitude，I am writing to you to express my thanks for your hospitality when I was traveling in America．You know how hard it is for a foreigner to travel in a foreign country alone．（高分句型一）I couldn't imagine what my vacation would be without your help．（高分句型二）I enjoyed myself very much．I will be glad if you can come to China to visit me．I hope we can still keep in touch with each other!I will forever remember the valued time with you．Thank you again and wish everything goes well．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Your sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．